Broken Steel

Chapter Two

Iron Road

Broken Steel · about 13 min

The cart was late.

Kent stood in the shade of the building across from the enlistment office and watched Broad Street move around him — merchants calling out to nobody in particular, a pair of city watchmen walking a slow route with the look of men who had stopped caring about their work years ago, a woman in a red dress arguing with a fishmonger over the price of something that smelled like it had already lost the argument with freshness. Normal morning. Normal city. He was watching it the way you watch a thing you know you’re about to leave.

The tag hung at his chest. The eagle stamped in copper. He didn’t touch it.

At quarter past the promised hour, a wagon rolled up from the east end of Broad Street — two horses, both looking like they’d seen better days and a lot more of them than they’d wanted, pulling a flat-bedded cart with wooden slat sides and a canvas cover stretched across iron hoops. The driver was a soldier, or had been once, going by the grey cloak he still wore and the fact that he drove like a man used to taking directions from nobody. He pulled up in front of the enlistment office, wrapped the reins once around the brake lever, and dropped down from the seat without looking at anyone.

Kent picked up his pack — a single bag with what little he’d thought to grab from the shed; the wrapped sword, the whetstone, a spare shirt, a small knife, coin enough to matter — and crossed the street.

The two men from the bench inside were already climbing up. The younger one, the boy with the split lip, had to be helped by the older labourer, who pulled him up with the flat efficiency of someone who’d grown up hauling things. Three other men were already seated in the wagon bed, men Kent hadn’t seen inside, who had presumably come from somewhere else in the city. One was massive, with hands the size of dinner plates and a square jaw set like a load-bearing wall. One was rail-thin, maybe twenty-five, with a sharp ferret-quick face and eyes that moved over everything and filed it away. The third was built like a stump — short, thick-necked, and staring at his own boots like they’d offended him.

Kent got in and found a section of the wooden bench that had the least splinters.

The soldier-driver came back out of the enlistment office with a folded paper in his hand, read something on it, tucked it inside his cloak, and climbed back to his seat. He said nothing to any of them. He unwrapped the reins and cracked them once.

The wagon rolled north.


Karlberg had five main roads that cut through it like veins, and the Ashgate road was the roughest of the lot — not the most dangerous, that honour belonged to the Lowditch runs down by the river — but the most worn down, the most neglected, the one that made itself known through your backside if you were riding a wagon with no proper cushion. Kent gripped the bench edge and endured it.

The city unrolled past the wagon’s slat sides. As they moved north, the middle city gave way to older districts, the stone buildings getting lower and heavier, the streets narrowing again. Here was where the old Karlberg persisted under the empire’s newer coat of paint — pre-Gallerian carvings worn almost smooth on the lintels, street names that nobody used anymore but which were still chiselled into the corner stones in an older script. The empire had rolled over Karlberg forty years back, absorbed it into the empire’s outer territories, and plastered its eagle over everything it could reach, but the city had been here long before and had a stubborn habit of remaining itself underneath.

The ferret-faced man broke the silence first.

“So,” he said, looking around at all of them with something between a grin and a grimace. “Which of you lot are volunteers and which of you are charity cases?”

Nobody answered.

“Right,” he said pleasantly. “All charity cases, then. Saves time.” He stretched his legs out as far as the wagon bed allowed, which wasn’t far. “Name’s Devn. I’m here because I broke a finger that belonged to a man who turned out to know Lord Assel’s steward personally. Funny how that works.”

“Brek,” said the big man, without inflection, like he was reporting to a ledger. He didn’t explain further.

The boy with the split lip said nothing. The short thick-necked man said nothing. The older labourer looked at Devn with the expression of someone who had decided the best approach to this person was to pretend he wasn’t there.

Kent said nothing.

Devn didn’t appear bothered. He seemed, in fact, like a man who was constitutionally incapable of being bothered, which Kent suspected would either make him very easy to be around or very difficult, depending on the day.

“Where are they taking us first?” Devn asked, directing this at the driver’s back.

“Ashgate muster,” the driver said, without turning. “Then you load onto the imperial transport.”

“Transport going where?”

A pause. “Aldenmere direction.”

Devn’s eyebrows went up. He turned to look at the group with genuine, if dark, interest. “Capital transport,” he said. “That’ll be the Camp of Death, then.”

The driver said nothing.

The boy with the split lip looked up sharply. “Camp of Death?”

“Training camp,” the big man, Brek, said. His voice was low, surprisingly measured for a man his size. “Outside Aldenmere. They call it that because not everyone finishes.”

“Not everyone finishes,” Devn repeated, and laughed like this was genuinely funny, though there was something underneath the laugh that wasn’t. “Beautiful way to put it. Like they wandered off or something. The Gallerian Army’s got the hardest training in Idan, friend. Has to. Empire stretches from the Frostwall in the north all the way down to the Reddesert coast in the south. You want soldiers who can fight in the ice and the sand both, you have to break a few of them getting there.”

The boy — he couldn’t have been more than sixteen — sat quiet with this. He turned the copper tag over and over in his fingers.

Kent watched the city pass. They were getting close to the Ashgate now; he could see the old northern wall, Karlberg’s original boundary from before it had grown past its own borders, a long dark line of stone with the gate cut through it like a mouth. The wall didn’t keep anyone out anymore — the city had sprawled well beyond it on both sides — but the Ashgate itself still stood, and the road still ran through it, and it still felt like crossing something.

“What’s in Aldenmere?” the older labourer asked. He’d decided to talk after all, apparently.

“The empire,” Devn said, like the answer was obvious. “The palace. The courts. The Imperial Knight School.” He said the last one differently — a shade quieter, a shade more careful. “That’s there too.”

Kent’s eyes moved from the wall to the back of Devn’s head.

“The Knight School,” the boy said. “I’ve heard of that.”

“Everyone’s heard of it. Doesn’t mean everyone knows what it actually is.” Devn picked something from under his fingernail. “The empire takes the best soldiers — not officers, not nobles, actual soldiers — and if they’re good enough, if they’ve got the records and the wins and someone in command willing to write their name down on a piece of paper and say this one, they get considered for the School. Knight training. Real training, not just the Camp.” He glanced around the wagon. “Knights serve the emperor direct. They’re not just soldiers. They’re — “ He seemed to search for the word. “Different. Higher. You make Knight and you’re not a commoner anymore. Not legally. Not any way that matters.”

The wagon hit a rut and bounced hard, knocking everyone’s teeth together. The driver didn’t flinch.

“Commoners don’t make Knight,” the older labourer said, flat.

“Mostly true,” Devn agreed. “But it happens. Not often. Empire’s not so stupid as to leave talent on the floor just because it’s not born fancy. It does happen.” He paused. “You have to be very, very good. And you have to survive long enough for anyone to notice.”

The wagon passed through the Ashgate. The old stone rose up on either side, close enough to touch, and then it was past and the road opened out into the broader northern district where the city got thin at the edges, buildings giving way to yards and storehouses and, beyond those, the actual outskirts — the proper outskirts, not the Ash, just open land where Karlberg had decided it was done expanding.

Kent sat with what Devn had said and turned it over the same way he worked a blade — not fast, not careless, but steadily and with attention to where the edge was.

Not a commoner anymore. Not legally. Not any way that matters.

He’d never wanted to be a knight. He’d never thought far enough ahead to want anything that specific. What he’d wanted, without being able to name it properly, was the feeling he had when he was training — when the sword was in his hand and he was working a form and everything else went quiet, and there was only the movement and the calculation and the absolute, clean certainty that he was good at this. That this was his. That no debt and no cold father and no measuring mother could touch it because it lived entirely inside him and had been built entirely by him, stone by stone, evening by evening, in the dark behind a shed.

The Knight School.

He’d heard the name. Everyone in Karlberg had, the same way everyone had heard of Aldenmere itself — as something that existed in another world, a world of marble halls and men in polished armour who rode horses worth more than a commoner’s entire life. He’d never placed himself near it. He’d never seen the point.

But that was before this morning. Before the bread on the table and the copper tag around his neck and the cart going north.

If they were taking him anyway. If the Camp of Death was where he was going regardless. If he was going to be ground down and hammered and remade into a Gallerian soldier whether he liked it or not.

Then he might as well be the best one they’d ever made.

He didn’t know if that was possible. He knew he was good — knew it the way he knew the edge on his knife, from direct and repeated evidence. He didn’t know how good good had to be, to become the kind of thing worth noticing.

He supposed he was about to find out.


The muster yard at Ashgate was a walled square of beaten earth just north of the old wall, with a permanent wooden scaffold at one end that served as a processing station and a covered area along the far side where men could sit out of the weather. A flag flew above it — the Gallerian eagle, grey on black, which was the military standard as distinct from the imperial gold — and two soldiers stood at the gate with crossed spears and the expressions of men doing a job that required absolute minimum mental engagement.

They opened the gate for the wagon without ceremony. The driver pulled in, stopped, and still without addressing anyone directly, jerked his head at the scaffold.

“Off,” he said. “Get your names marked. Wait.”

They climbed down.

There were more men already in the yard. Kent counted thirty-two without trying hard, ranging from boys who hadn’t finished growing into their height to a man with a grey beard who moved like his knees had been arguing with him for years. Most of them sat along the covered side in loose groups, not talking much, doing the thing people do when they’re waiting for something unpleasant and they’ve run out of ways to pretend they’re not.

A soldier at the scaffold table took their names — a different one than the clerk on Broad Street, older, with a scar that had taken most of his left earlobe and hadn’t left a clean edge. He wrote with a quill that needed recutting and he wrote slowly, but he looked at each man properly when they gave their names, the way someone who was actually assessing them might look rather than someone just filling in a ledger.

When he looked at Kent, he paused. Looked at the sword. Looked at the hands.

“You paid or impressed?” he asked. It was the same question the clerk had asked, but it didn’t sound the same coming from this man. It sounded like it might actually mean something.

“Impressed,” Kent said.

The soldier wrote it down. He looked at Kent once more before he did — just a half-second, not long enough to mean anything specific — and then moved to the next man.

Kent found a section of the covered wall and put his back against it. He set his pack between his feet where he could feel it. Across the yard, Devn had already found a group to talk at, gesturing with both hands about something that was making one man laugh and another look deeply tired.

Brek sat alone near the gate, looking at nothing with focused attention, like the nothing contained useful information.

The boy with the split lip sat a few feet from Kent and didn’t say anything, but he kept glancing over the way young men do when they want to ask something but can’t make themselves start.

Kent ignored him for a while. Then he said, without looking over, “Stop doing that.”

The boy went red. “Sorry. I was just — you’ve got a sword.”

“I do.”

“They let you keep it?”

“Nobody tried to stop me.”

The boy chewed on this. He was sixteen at the outside, round-faced, and the split lip made him look younger. “You know how to use it?”

Kent looked at him for a moment. “Yes.”

“I don’t know anything,” the boy said, and the way he said it was not self-pity but just a plain accounting of fact, like noting the weather. “I grew up on my uncle’s farm. I know which end of a pitchfork to hold.”

“That’s more than some men know about a sword.”

The boy almost smiled, which pulled at the split lip and made him wince. He pressed his sleeve to his mouth. “I’m Fen,” he said.

“Kent.”

They sat in silence after that, which was a more comfortable silence than before. Across the yard, a soldier was moving between the groups and speaking in short sentences that made men look up or look at the ground depending on what they’d just heard.

He reached Kent’s section eventually. He was young for his rank, whatever his rank was — though he wore more silver on his cloak-clasp than the men at the gate, which meant something in the imperial system — and he had the worn, permanently alert face of someone who hadn’t been young since roughly the age of twelve.

“Transport for the capital road leaves at dawn tomorrow,” he said. “You’ll bunk here tonight. Eat here. Don’t leave the yard.” He looked at the group. “You’ll be twelve days on the road to Aldenmere, give or take. Camp assignments happen when you arrive.” He paused. Let the next part settle in. “Gallerian training runs four months. Some men don’t complete it. That’s not said to frighten you. It’s said so you’re not surprised if it happens.”

Some men don’t complete it. Clean, even, official. The same information Devn had dressed in dark humour, emptied of all colour now.

Nobody asked what don’t complete meant, exactly. Nobody needed to.

The soldier moved on.

Kent pulled his pack up onto his knees and rested his arms across it. The eagle tag shifted against his chest. Outside the yard walls, he could hear the tail end of Karlberg going about its business — a hammer striking metal somewhere close, the eternal argument of a street vendor, the distant bells of whatever temple was deciding it was a good time for bells.

He thought about the Knight School again. Thought about it deliberately this time, not as a daydream but the way he thought about a new sword form — practically, from the structure outward, looking for where the weaknesses were and how to shore them up.

He was a commoner with no name worth anything. He had a sword, a whetstone, and the kind of ability that had never been tested by anyone more dangerous than a sparring partner in a back alley. He was going to a training camp that men didn’t always leave. He was starting from nothing, which in Idan meant he was starting slightly below the ground floor.

But he was good. He was very good. And the empire, according to Devn, was not entirely stupid.

He’d need to survive the Camp first. He’d need to be noticed. He’d need a record and a name and someone in command who looked at him the way that scarred soldier at the processing table had — with an assessor’s eye instead of a clerk’s.

It was a long way from here to there. A long way, through things he couldn’t see yet, against odds that hadn’t been named to him.

He’d been building himself in a rotting shed with no teacher and no backing for three years.

This was just more of the same. On a larger scale.

Kent settled his back against the wall and watched the yard fill up with the Empire’s unwilling and unlucky, and waited for tomorrow’s dawn to come.

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